tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post7587591366766170303..comments2023-10-20T10:10:49.698-04:00Comments on Farix-Forever: Character Building, Part OneShelby Mariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08141706242793238749noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-70111930663129764182008-03-17T22:45:00.000-04:002008-03-17T22:45:00.000-04:00sorry bout that mess, but i'm still learning how t...sorry bout that mess, but i'm still learning how to use blogger. <BR/><BR/>i may have to reread part of my book; i don't think it's badly written, but one never knows, do they, hmm?<BR/><BR/>anyways, keep writing, and maybe post a few interesting bits of the story every now and then. I should start doing that!!<BR/><BR/>----mike----Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12935516252733258432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-87612493365115581442008-03-17T22:39:00.000-04:002008-03-17T22:39:00.000-04:00shelby, if you would be kind enough to my last com...shelby, if you would be kind enough to my last comment off, it's slightly wrong; i would elaborate, but it involves the security of my/Ian's website. <BR/><BR/>the actual URL to go to to view the firsts of my books' contents would be:<BR/><BR/>http://powerofthepen.maylanshore.googlepages.com/prologueandfirstchapterofriverofdreams<BR/><BR/>(for River of Dreams)<BR/><BR/>and <BR/><BR/>http://powerofthepen.maylanshore.googlepages.com/prologueandfirstpageofchicagomidnight<BR/><BR/>for Chicago Midnight.<BR/><BR/>Keep writing, Shelby..and hurry up and write that book, i need something good to read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12935516252733258432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-69612519692015694492008-03-17T22:34:00.000-04:002008-03-17T22:34:00.000-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12935516252733258432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-82917830213847412922008-03-17T15:56:00.000-04:002008-03-17T15:56:00.000-04:00HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! Have a G-R-E-A-TDay!HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! Have a G-R-E-A-T<BR/>Day!Camdenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01470713412584682896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-70870089114298110342008-03-17T12:50:00.000-04:002008-03-17T12:50:00.000-04:00HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...14 today right? HAve a gre...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...14 today right? <BR/><BR/>HAve a great BiRtHdAy!<BR/><BR/>:)Ian(:Ianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14289566223624035599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-34183796776173908482008-03-17T11:25:00.000-04:002008-03-17T11:25:00.000-04:00HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHELBY!! Check my blogHAPPY BIRTHDAY SHELBY!! Check my blogArakenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02159085503154184232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-50019453394917686692008-03-17T09:47:00.000-04:002008-03-17T09:47:00.000-04:00Hey guys, glad you liked my post.Araken--no name f...Hey guys, glad you liked my post.<BR/>Araken--no name for the trees yet. Any ideas?<BR/>Sapphira--Adonai is indeed my God-figure.<BR/>Christian--thank you very much!<BR/><BR/>Write On!!!<BR/>Shelby MarieShelby Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08141706242793238749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-44869591930945219442008-03-17T09:43:00.000-04:002008-03-17T09:43:00.000-04:00Happy Birthday, Shelby! I'll post something about ...Happy Birthday, Shelby! I'll post something about it later!Sapphira Adihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14097338181772892808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-74442619754729746252008-03-17T09:32:00.000-04:002008-03-17T09:32:00.000-04:00HPPY BIRTHDAY SHELBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...HPPY BIRTHDAY SHELBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-34612267527938094802008-03-16T18:10:00.000-04:002008-03-16T18:10:00.000-04:00Thanks, Araken:) By the way, just because I write ...Thanks, Araken:) By the way, just because I write good poems (as you all you say they are) doesn't mean I'm not a dunderhead in other subjects (which I'm not!). Before I continue rambling, I'll just say one more time: great advice, Shelby!Sapphira Adihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14097338181772892808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-52617212042704686152008-03-16T12:58:00.000-04:002008-03-16T12:58:00.000-04:00I agree with Ian. I haven't exactly thrust all the...I agree with Ian. I haven't exactly thrust all the history in the audiences face, persay, but I still think that maybe the history could be a little more spaced. I'll have to look at that.Camdenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01470713412584682896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-42535547872100030052008-03-15T17:48:00.000-04:002008-03-15T17:48:00.000-04:00Sapphira- You're very smart. I haven't come up wit...Sapphira- You're very smart. I haven't come up with as many poems as you have.<BR/><BR/>Shelby- glad to fight alongside you in this warArakenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02159085503154184232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-79725865292218990552008-03-14T19:36:00.000-04:002008-03-14T19:36:00.000-04:00Great, now I feel kind of stupid. *glares at Arake...Great, now I feel kind of stupid. *glares at Araken* Just kidding:)Sapphira Adihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14097338181772892808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-35111499219874601282008-03-14T19:34:00.000-04:002008-03-14T19:34:00.000-04:00Wow, that is really cool! So what do you call thes...Wow, that is really cool! So what do you call these trees?<BR/><BR/>Sapphira- Adonai is a Hebrew word, one of the names of God. I'd say yes to your first question.Arakenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02159085503154184232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-74830693523076239812008-03-14T15:28:00.000-04:002008-03-14T15:28:00.000-04:00That was great, Shelby! Is Adonai the God-figure i...That was great, Shelby! Is Adonai the God-figure in you book? Or do you want us to find out?Sapphira Adihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14097338181772892808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2455413076169705651.post-62795870706524555572008-03-14T13:41:00.000-04:002008-03-14T13:41:00.000-04:00Great writing advice...I'll have to rewrite the fi...Great writing advice...I'll have to rewrite the first part of my book. <BR/><BR/>:)Ian(:Ianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14289566223624035599noreply@blogger.com